This was great! I love the tone--reflective but very present even as Nate seems to watch things happen as if from a distance. I like how each part has something of a meaningful punch and how each bit is pulled together very linearly to the conclusion of the two of them getting together, and then just being together. I hope you keep writing!!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2010-02-04 03:42 pm (UTC)