How does she get published? Does she have a no-edit clause? I stopped reading her books years ago, but even then she'd degenerated to poorly written, run-on, unedited sentences. Seriously, my sister and I went through and counted entire paragraphs that were composed of single sentences. And plot went out the door to make way for Anita's magical vagina. Which might be okay if you can get past the idea of fucking that many people and still being able to get up and function the next morning. Porn's awesome - but I prefer my porn to be well-written.
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Date: 2009-07-31 09:43 pm (UTC)How does she get published? Does she have a no-edit clause? I stopped reading her books years ago, but even then she'd degenerated to poorly written, run-on, unedited sentences. Seriously, my sister and I went through and counted entire paragraphs that were composed of single sentences. And plot went out the door to make way for Anita's magical vagina. Which might be okay if you can get past the idea of fucking that many people and still being able to get up and function the next morning. Porn's awesome - but I prefer my porn to be well-written.