I'm naugty cause I haven't read any of the other bits in this arc. Found you through lightningwave's flist and thought hooray for some HD smuttage. And truly this was very well done. I'm not usually a fan of awkward realistic first sex cause it just makes me cringe. But I liked how you didn't make it all earth shattering, but you also didn't make them embarassingly naive and clumsy. So very very well done! I will definitely be checking out the rest of this.
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Date: 2006-02-06 08:34 am (UTC)