Only typo I saw was in this line He might have been embarrassed by his lack of restraint or finesse if had had time to think about it... - a missing "he"? or the first had should be "he'd", perhaps?
Did they really indulge in watersports? *raised eyebrow* Or did they simply have sex in the shower? ;)
But yes, yummy yummy yummy. I honestly didn't expect Draco to bottom (even if he did do it from the top, heh). He's so lovely, and I love that he muses over Harry not being able to hold his expression in check at the breakfast table next morning.
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Date: 2006-02-06 06:14 am (UTC)Yummy! :)
Only typo I saw was in this line He might have been embarrassed by his lack of restraint or finesse if had had time to think about it... - a missing "he"? or the first had should be "he'd", perhaps?
Did they really indulge in watersports? *raised eyebrow* Or did they simply have sex in the shower? ;)
But yes, yummy yummy yummy. I honestly didn't expect Draco to bottom (even if he did do it from the top, heh). He's so lovely, and I love that he muses over Harry not being able to hold his expression in check at the breakfast table next morning.
I loved the night before, too...