The image of them walking in on another couple in flagrante was very funny. I liked Harry's ruminations about things and I adored that kiss. So very sweet.
Draco was wonderful. I love his jealousy and that he realizes that Harry is just clueless about some things.
The letter from Molly was perfect and those last lines of dialogue were absolutely lovely.
I'd love to see Ginny and maybe Ron accusing Harry of inviting Draco, saying that Draco is unwelcome and Molly stepping in and telling them exactly what she things. *grin*
This installment is fabulous m'dear. Not awkward or stilted at all.
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Date: 2006-01-21 08:00 pm (UTC)The image of them walking in on another couple in flagrante was very funny. I liked Harry's ruminations about things and I adored that kiss. So very sweet.
Draco was wonderful. I love his jealousy and that he realizes that Harry is just clueless about some things.
The letter from Molly was perfect and those last lines of dialogue were absolutely lovely.
I'd love to see Ginny and maybe Ron accusing Harry of inviting Draco, saying that Draco is unwelcome and Molly stepping in and telling them exactly what she things. *grin*
This installment is fabulous m'dear. Not awkward or stilted at all.