Date: 2006-01-08 11:58 pm (UTC)
I have absolutely no criticism, constructive or otherwise. I like the bit about Ron being reluctant to perform cunnilingus. It seems very Ron-like.

I do have one question, though... What are the chances that Hermione conceived? I mean, none of them thought about contraception...
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