Improv (bandom, Brendon/Shane)

I have no idea what is wrong with me. I fell asleep on the sofa at ~9pm last night. I woke at ~11pm, did nothing of consequence, and actually went to bed before 1am. I feel like I do nothing but sleep and work lately, and I do not like this.

But!

Something was accomplished. Mainly because of why_me_why_not's efforts at tying our random bits and pieces together.



Improv
by why_me_why_not and irisgirl12000
bandom ll adult ll Brendon/Shane ll ~3300 words
mild D/s


Brendon catches Shane staring (again) and yanks the cuffs of his hoodie down self-consciously. It's not like the marks are that distinct; they barely look like smudges of dirt against Brendon's skin.



'kay. I'm going to write the porn that I was trying not to write the other night. Have a happy Wednesday, everybody!

I have thinky thoughts, but I'd rather ask your opinion(s)

Because AFYCSO was on repeat on my iPod all afternoon...


stay where I can see you / douse the lights

putting out the lantern / find your own way back home


What do the differences in phrasing and word choice tell us about the people who penned them?

DISCUSS, PLEASE. (WITH PICTURES, IF YOU SO CHOOSE.)