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asimplechord ([personal profile] asimplechord) wrote2006-08-14 10:31 pm
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Fic: Yours (Fred/George, PG-13)

Title: Yours
Author: irisgirl12000
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 767
Warnings: twincest, angst
Disclaimer: The HP universe is the property of J. K. Rowling and various media corporations.
A/N: This fits after An ecstasy of fumbling. It fulfills prompt #34, "yours", and it falls into the same universe as my two previous [livejournal.com profile] 100quills drabbles (see the grid with links to all prompts here).


Harry's footsteps pattered down the stairs and off into the distance. A few seconds later, the sound of the door opening and closing echoed up the stairwell.

Fred sat silently, contemplating the door through which Harry had made his exit. George leaned with one hand on the window frame, watching early morning traffic down on the Alley, sipping his tea and letting the silence stretch. He had no doubts, no concerns about what they had started with their invitation to Harry, but he knew without asking that Fred did. He could tell by the set of Fred's shoulders, the way his head tilted to the right, that Fred was thinking not-quite-happy thoughts.

Although they had both been with other people before, they had never shared another partner. Harry was their friend, their coworker, almost family; another Gryffindor with a hidden streak of cunning, he was appealing in a slim, dark, stronger-than-he-appeared way, and he was obviously attracted to them. Still, George was fairly certain that Fred was wondering if their spur-of-the-moment decision had been a wise one.

"Do you think Ginny'll find out?" Fred's question was not the one George had expected.

"Mmm… possibly. I don't think Harry will tell her, but she's so determined to have him, she'll notice when he continues to put her off."

"She won't take it well."

"No. And when she realizes he's interested in blokes, her reaction will be even worse."

"Mmm." Fred lifted his teacup and considered that idea for a few sips. Then, "You think Harry will want more? Or was that just curiosity?"

"I think our Harry is only beginning to decide what he wants from life, and seeing us together flipped a switch for him."

Solemn brown eyes, mirrors of his own, scanned George's face, searching for some clue.

"And if he decides he wants us?"

"I suppose we can accommodate him. No hardship, is it?" George's grin was cheerfully lascivious, but there was no answering smile from Fred. His gaze had dropped to fix on fingers that were worrying the cold toast on his plate, scattering crumbs on the low table in front of the sofa.

George hadn't seen Fred this tentative since his first hesitant admittance that he sometimes thought of the pair of them as a couple.

"Do you not want to…?"

"No, it's not that. It's just… when we were with other people before, it was, you know, separate. Knowing you were out with Lee and what you might have been doing with him isn't quite the same thing as seeing it. Or sharing it. I mean, after we started doing this–" Fred waved his hand in a vague gesture that encompassed them both "–didn't it bother you to know I was still seeing Angelina sometimes?"

Disconcerted by Fred's inability to describe their relationship aloud, George frowned.

"Honestly? I hated to share you with her. Not because I was jealous, but because it bothered me that you would be with someone for the wrong reason. You seemed to be doing it to make her happy, not because you wanted it."

"It wasn't like that!" Fred sounded a bit defensive now. "I liked her well enough, and I couldn't just leave her flat."

"If you say so."

"Hmph. So you weren't jealous? You wouldn't mind if I went home with some random stranger?"

George sighed. He sometimes wondered if Fred deliberately misunderstood him, simply to hear him say things aloud. Once the words were spoken, it was real, undeniable.

"You're not listening, or maybe just not understanding. I've known how we're meant to be since we were twelve. You're a part of me. Part of me is yours forever, no matter who else we shag, together or apart."

Fred looked so vulnerable, so exposed, that George couldn't help but sympathize. He'd had years of watching Fred and Angelina to come to grips with the concept, hadn't he? Fred's understanding of the full scope of their unusual relationship had come years later. Sometimes it seemed obvious, to George at least, that he hadn't given the repercussions and nuances of their choice much thought before acting.

He pushed away from his spot by the window and sat down on the sofa next to Fred, pulling him into the curve of his arm. He turned them and leaned forward so that their foreheads rested together, allowing direct eye contact. Fred wouldn't meet his gaze at first. Instead, his eyes flicked down and away. Finally he looked up, and was caught by the honesty, candor, and emotion in George's identical eyes.

No more words were necessary.

[identity profile] jadzialove.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! I wasn't expecting the unhappy thoughts, but it was beautifully done. It's wonderful see them weighing consequences and even measuring themselves and their, well, 'themness'. You've managed to add another dimension to them that's not often seen.

Just wonderful.

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry, no smut yet. That's coming up next. This ficlet is marked PG-13 only because I think twincest and the reference to them having a threesome isn't appropriate for kids.

You know, I was just looking at this, wondering if I should put a "mild angst" warning on it.

*pets Fred* It'll be alright.

[identity profile] jadzialove.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
See, I can handle, and even appreciate, 'no smut' fics once in a while. This one made me love them even more. I thought it was lovely.

[identity profile] a-carnal-mink.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 03:46 am (UTC)(link)

Absolutely gorgeous and beautiful, darling. :) Made me feel all... girly and wistful, that did. ;)

SO wanting to keep visiting with this lot...

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
I have 47 more installments of these boys to write, so there will be so much Fred/George you'll get tired of me and them. Not that I'm counting or anything, really. :)

It struck me that Fred did everything George asked or ordered the night before without expressing much of an opinion. It was time for him to say something, even if he was a bit obtuse about it.

[identity profile] a-carnal-mink.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 04:17 am (UTC)(link)

Woot for 47 more twinny moment still to come!! :D I very much doubt I'll be tired of any of it at any stage, m'dear.

Oh, and Fred picking at the leftover toast and scattering crumbs? Heart-breaking. Love it. :)
ext_71888: (twins gof)

Yours

[identity profile] koshweasley.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
I want to hug Fred! This is really good. I love the emotion between these two. I always assumed they both were alright with what ever the other did, and no hang-ups. Well done!

And Yeah for the twins! ! ! ! ! !!

Re: Yours

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
They're comfortable with being a couple in my little world, but this is the first time a third person has joined them both. And that is what is bothering Fred, the change in the equilibrium and twin dynamic. Any previous extracurricular activies were out of sight, and therefore able to be dismissed.

I think it surprised George, really. He's used to them always being on the same level, and they WERE both enjoying the threesome while it was happening. Fred didn't have doubts until later.

/backstory that is all in my head, not on paper
ext_71888: (twins gof)

Re: Yours

[identity profile] koshweasley.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
Backstory is cool. There's so much to this, and you did a superb job.

[identity profile] lilyeyes.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
*sigh* I love your twins! Fred is so wonderfully warm and considerate, George trying a bit of bravado, but they both love their 'little Harry'! Nice depth to your Tweasleys

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Like I said earlier, I'm trying to write something more than pure porn. Just to see if I can.

[identity profile] animehime.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
This was actually the perfect follow-up to the previous 2 ficlets. =) George being sure of who and what they are, but with Fred having some doubts about what they'd just done, it shows their own personalities. It was really cute.

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'm trying to mix actual story-telling and character development (new things for me!) into the Fred/George stuff I've written in the past.

[identity profile] animehime.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
Well, you're doing a great job at it. =D

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes*
Aw, thanks!

[identity profile] ex-petquali.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
NIcely done. I adore how intensely you have them both caring for each other, as well as Harry. Too bad they don't feel as much for Ginny! ;)

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-15 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm, you know, I'm still pondering how to best express their feelings for Ginny vis-a-vis her obsession with Harry. It's not that they are unconcerned about her. Obviously they love her, but she is a thing separate from them. As long as Harry has made his intentions clear and doesn't flaunt his behavior, they're not going to worry about it.

Of course, they have no idea what is happening with the Pensieve while they're having this discussion. Their reaction to THAT will come later.

[identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 09:04 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely to see the twins thinking their way through things. And I love how they see Harry. :)
I can't wait to see what they say about what Ginny did... *g*

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-18 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
They're... not going to be happy with her, I'll just leave it at that. But really, they can't be surprised that she makes every effort to get what she wants. After all, she learned it from them. :)

[identity profile] wolfiekins.livejournal.com 2006-08-16 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely fantastic! So much emotion in such a short package! I just love it when the twins show their depth of feeling like this. Excellent chat about how they truly belong to each other. Nice touch to have Fred be a bit hesitant. And the ending...frelling perfect. Brilliant work!

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-18 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!I've been accused of writing somewhat tired PWP, so I'm trying to expand a wee bit. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[identity profile] sugareey.livejournal.com 2006-08-22 06:30 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't read a Fred/George fic in so long, it's not even funny. I love how this kind of leave things up in the air though. All the curiosity and the thoughts. Nice.

[identity profile] asimplechord.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I've been really focused on the porny side of Fred/George, but this set of prompts gives me a chance to explore some other aspects of their relationship. :)