http://sheveled.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sheveled.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] asimplechord 2010-11-27 07:34 am (UTC)

...I didn't even know how much I needed a moment where Nate gets to be tall and strong and easily able to move someone where he wants. Because, yes. So thank you for that, first of all.

Sort of in line with that, I love the repeated use of words that give Nate such a solid presence, and how that's alternately a good and a scary thing. That is universally Brad, while things like the tiny doubts about her clothes make her her own person. And I'll second every compliment about the details, both in her and in their relationship.


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